Monday 26 July 2021
The amazing day of my life
On the 2 week of my holidays on Thursday me and my mum and dad went to Sylvia Park to watch a movie.We watch Space Jam and it was so cool.After that we went to the arcade and the arcade was right next to the movie theater.At the arcade we played games while waiting to go bowling but the bowling took to long so we went to play mini golf and that was lots of fun but sadly my dad won the mini golf.Lastly we got churros and went home.That was my amazing day of my life.
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ReplyDeletehello eiola I think it was cool that you went to the movies, golf and the arcade. Also did you get all of the points in the golf
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ReplyDeleteKia orana Iola.I really like the way you have wrote a paragraph of what you did in the Holidays,this poster also reminds me of mine.Did you also notice that the size of the writing is big and small.
ReplyDeleteFakaalofa lahi atu Iola!,What you did on the holidays. I wonder what games you played at the arcade and by that time I was also playing at the arcades in Manukau. The games I played at the arcades were Mario Kart racing.I also suggest you should look if your paragraph makes sense or not. Im trying to be rude but this is a great post! C:
ReplyDeletekia orana iola, its me labrohn from ruapotaka school,I really like the way you put in the picture of the arcade.I also think your work is awesome because you have a nice and good picture of mini golf as well.i also went somewhere familiar to the arcade on your blog.you could add one or two sentences.
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